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Page 48 - Secret to Everyone
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Page 48 - Secret to Everyone

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This page will probably go down as the page that went through the most dialogue revision. Before this, the conversation was basically Ruby refusing to tell Jess because what she had to say was too crazy, then literally caves from a two-word phrase from Jess. This version is supposed to ease Ruby into telling Jess about Caine, as if she's ready to tell her anyway. She just needs that promise.



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Great page!
view Owlsy's profile
Been through those big dialogue struggles. It's really good here, flows very naturally, love the way you draw these characters too

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