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Tuesday, the 31st of January, 2017

Page 21 - Appreciation
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Page 21 - Appreciation

view Joshua Sturm's profile
I really like the backgrounds for this page; I like how full it looks. I know they're simple (and some copy-pasted), but they look like what I want most of my backgrounds to feel.
Stay tuned for the soup-tasting of a lifetime.


view PeterVonBrown's profile
What I like is the gentle head movement of Caine from panel 2 to 3. It's quite effective in conveying the moment. You can feel his surprise and the tenderness. Well done. Also, there's nothing wrong with cut and pasting. At least in my opinion. It's a WEBcomic - a digital media - so it's just using the tools are available in the craft. The background WOULDN'T change, so redrawing it is a disservice to it. :)
view Joshua Sturm's profile
That head and ear movement, (I can't believe I didn't mention this in the commentary) it was the exact moment during my planning period that I realized I loved drawing Caine. The ear movement gives me so many opportunities for conveying non-facial emotions I've never used before.
view melaredblu's profile
Well, that smoothed over about as well as it could.
view Envine's profile
I'm not against copy-pasting, I mean, if it's the background its not a problem. ^^
But you should have draw again the rain, because it looks like the world is being frozen x)

Again, its not that bad, because we are concentrated on the characters.
view Joshua Sturm's profile
Frozen rain? I have no idea what you're talking about.
*inconspicuous cough*

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